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29 January 2007 @ 02:05 am
Default Icon Drabble Challenge  
Title: The Weight Of The World
Author: ongiara
Genre: Gen
Rating: PG-13
Written for mcee's Default Icon Drabble Challenge
Prompt: Write a drabble (100 words exactly) based on your current default icon.
A/N: Unbeta'ed and angsty because I'm an angst whore^^

On the edges, his mask was crumbling, and it was all he could do to turn away, trying to cover the holes with trembling hands before Sam would see something that wasn’t him at all and looked too much like broken glass.

Secrets had robbed too much from his family already.

Uniting, separating them.

And while he understood he’d have to laden his brother with this burden sooner or later - because he owed him a truth his father had wished to be a lie - he just didn’t know how to take the last bit of innocence away from his brother.




Now, everyone else go and participate in The Default Icon Drabble Challenge! :)
 
 
Current Mood: anxiousanxious
Current Music: The Raconteurs - Blue Veins
 
 
 
Kristencakeholes on January 29th, 2007 01:40 am (UTC)
Oooh so much angst! Your not the only angst whore here.

he just didn’t know how to take the last bit of innocence away from his brother
I love this line. It really ties the whole thing together.

Beautiful drabble! :D
ヴェレーナ: dean plaything eyesongiara on January 29th, 2007 09:36 am (UTC)
Thank you, that line was inspired by the ending of Something Wicked and I thought it fit nicely :)
paz_ on January 29th, 2007 03:05 am (UTC)
mmmangst.

It's beautiful! It really is. And hurty, because it's true. Oh, Dean.

You captured so much in just 100 words... makes me want to see more snippets like this, get more glimpses inside his head. :)
ヴェレーナ: sd b&w necksongiara on January 29th, 2007 09:42 am (UTC)
Thank you! Dean just went inside my head and wouldn't leave ^.^ Well, maybe, if I'm lucky he stops by again some time ;D Thanks again.
justfreefallin: 212 screwedjustfreefallin on January 29th, 2007 07:26 am (UTC)
This is so beautiful! You should write more! Seriously! *pokes you with a stick* Hee!
ヴェレーナ: dean türkis/bwongiara on January 29th, 2007 09:45 am (UTC)
*rubs arm where she got poked* Thank you! It was nice to try something different for a change. Glad you liked ♥
valkrys: SPN Dean and Sam looking at each othervalkrys on January 29th, 2007 07:41 am (UTC)
Wow. This is beautiful! It's amazing what you can do with a 100 words drabble, now imagine how creative and expressive you could go with a full story?? *hint* Hee.

Loved this one and I'm sure you'd be a terrific fanfic writer, judging from your style!
ヴェレーナ: father sonongiara on January 29th, 2007 09:48 am (UTC)
*blushes* Thank you! It seems my brain decided to get rolling around 2 a.m. It was nice for a change though I better leave the big storys to the real writers of this fandom :)
Cami: SPN - brothersilovemybaby on January 29th, 2007 04:31 pm (UTC)
*Awesome* drabble, sweetie!!
I think there was no way it wouldn't turn out angsty, because your icon is kinda angsty per si, isn't it? I mean, I always looked at it with angsty eyes, and that's one of the reasons why I think it's such a beautiful icon. ♥

Anyway, amazing drabble!! I love how you show that despite everything, Dean still loves his brother more than everything and is willing to do everything (even hide his true feelings) to protect him and prevent his 'innocence' from dying. Is hard to see that he realizes he probably won't be able to do it, but damn he tries every single day. And we all know it.

That's why I keep saying, you gotta love Dean. And Sammy. And you. ♥
ヴェレーナ: sd b&w necksongiara on January 29th, 2007 04:44 pm (UTC)
Awww, I'm in love with your comment and you *squishes*

Is hard to see that he realizes he probably won't be able to do it, but damn he tries every single day. And we all know it.
Thanks, that about is what I wanted to say. He knows he'll have to tell Sam, it's inevitable, but he also knows that it'll mean life as they both know it, will be over. And neither of them is ready for that truth yet. I'm so glad that came across, hee.

You know, that gorgeous icon you used easily fits this as well. They do angsty so beautifully :)

Thanks so much again, it makes me ridicously happy ♥